I finished Personal and Military History of Philip Kearny, Major-General United States Volunteers, by John Watts De Peyster yesterday, and it has been my ten-pages-a-day quota book for several weeks. Frankly, I don't think I could have tolerated reading it any faster. It's a pretty badly written book. Why did I read it, then, you ask? Well, Kearny had an interesting life, so it should have been an interesting biography. And De Peyster was his cousin, his sometime military aide, and an interesting character himself. So I read it for historical interest (I couldn't find another bio of Kearny), and because it is sometimes interesting to read a bad book to understand why some things fade quickly from the bookshelves. Phil Kearny was a cavalry officer in the 1830s, and he was assigned to visit the cavalry school in France, in order to see how they did things over there. This was necessary because the U.S. had only recently invented a Cavalry, and had essentially no experience. Kearny, and others, went; and he volunteered to go along on a campaign in Algeria against bandits and revolutionaries there, so he saw combat. Later he also joined the French army in Italy, and fought in the famous battle of Solferino. Between those two foreign events, he fought in the Mexican War, and he lost his left arm as the result of a charge by his dragoons up to the very gates of Mexico City. Actually, he was shot as he pulled back, but the charge is famous. When the Civil War broke out, he was not called back into service. He helped raise some units of volunteers in New York, but the NY militia declined to offer him a command. The State of New Jersey decided to offer him a command, and so he became a Volunteer Officer in the war, and served mostly under McClellan's command. He fought in several battles of the Peninsular Campaign, then with Pope at Second Bull Run. He was killed, soon thereafter, at Chantilly. De Peyster, Kearny's cousin, is an interesting character, too. He wrote a prophetic series of articles in The Army and Navy Journal which claimed that loose order (skirmish order) needed to become the battle formation for infantry, due to the greater killing capacity of modern weapons. This was adopted by some commanders in the Civil War, and in later wars, but didn't really become standard in the US Army until World War II. His articles were translated into several languages, and had the effect of causing the adoption of this tactic in several European armies. De Peyster did many beneficial things for the public, as well. He made historic contributions to the development of fire departments, among other things. But, it also seems he was a bit of a crank (see the wikipedia article), and it shows throughout this book. The writing of this book is so "bad" by modern tastes, that it's hard to tell (without reading other books of his) how he could have been so widely published in his day. He wrote numerous top-selling works. But this biography of his cousin is bad. Really bad. The first problem is that De Peyster cannot, cannot, will not, simply cannot stick to the subject. He constantly digresses from what he's saying about Kearny in order to compare him to a dozen different people in history, and then digresses again into a discussion of the specific cases in the life of that other person, long dead, that led to the comparison. The result is that he buries what might have been said about Kearny under non-pertinent information. He also begins each chapter, and also fills the text and footnotes, with scores of quotations from books about other generals, or other things, that would be apropos if written about Kearny, but they actually aren't. He sometimes puts Kearny's name in brackets after the name of the person it's actually about, and if a comment about another character is included, then we get brackets with the name of the comparative character in there as well. Later De Peyster gets in a fight with his editor over length restrictions (yes, he makes snippy remarks about the editor IN THE PAGES OF THE PUBLISHED BOOK), but he could easily have said what needed to be said, if only he'd left out all this impedimenta of useless quotation. I kid you not, maybe a quarter or more of the text is quotes that have nothing to do with the subject. Just to make my point, opening to the middle of the book, Chapter XIX, "The Second Advance to Manassas", we find a series of quotes: an unnamed poem which I suspect he wrote himself, Capt. Blake's "Three Years in the Army"; Richard III, Scott's "Marmion", Titus Andronicus, Richard III (again), Virgil, and, one more time, Titus Andronicus. De Peyster also has axes to grind about many things, and he keeps cramming them into the text. I am, literally, reminded of Mr. Dick's problems with the head of Charles I. De Peyster hated McClellan (as did Kearny, who had to serve under him), so he constantly digresses about McClellan's faults. This leads to a whole chapter on the First Battle of Bull Run, which would be fine, if Kearny had fought in that battle. BUT KEARNY WASN'T EVEN IN THE ARMY THEN. He was training New Jersey troops, under a militia commission. What makes this rant about Bull Run even worse, is that IT ISN'T EVEN ABOUT BULL RUN. Instead it's a catalog of historic routs from all through history, and I guess that's supposed to lessen the shame of this one. Beats me. But he digresses from his own digression. Did I say he can't stick to his subject, even when he isn't sticking to his subject? De Peyster thinks Hooker and Pope were underappreciated and maligned, so he is constantly stopping his story to discuss them, instead. He's got some other weird historical ideas (like thinking that the Governor of St. Helena treated Napoleon well), and he stops to tell us those. He starts a sentence that should be about Kearny, but then he brings up Bayard, and that brings up something else, and he never gets back to Kearny. My summary of the style is in my notes: "He spends more time writing about what he isn't writing about than what he is." Later on, one discovers another purpose behind this book, and perhaps the reason for its shape. It seems that De Peyster, nominally a General of volunteers, but not given a command or staff position, was writing articles and letters telling everybody in the Union Army what to do, probably with the same endless citations of historical precedents to prove his point. He was briefly (at the battle of Williamsburg) on Kearny's staff, and got mentioned and praised in Kearny's report. We learn this because De Peyster quotes the report, and doesn't extract that part (as almost any gentleman would). He then quotes letters from Kearny to himself in which Kearny says, in effect, "You may have invented that strategy first, and written a letter to X about it, but now it's "his" strategy. Maybe he didn't reply to your letter because he didn't want to tip his hand..." which tells us that he was trying to tell De Peyster to lay off. De Peyster doesn't get it, and publishes the letter to show that he doesn't get it. So this book was De Peyster's excuse to say, "I told you so." To say, "Kearny was a great general, he should have been in charge, and I was his advisor. I played wargames with him as a child, and so I trained him." The crank syndrome may have been a family trait. It seems Kearny, though terribly solicitous of his troops, could be a jerk with his fellow officers. At Second Bull Run he got an aide captured, by insisting that a nearby house wasn't in the hands of the enemy, despite the aide's assurances that he had ridden by it and seen the Confederates there. Kearny insisted they go over and see, and the aide got him to agree to let him (the aide) ride 50 yards ahead. The result was the aide was captured, and Kearny lived a few more days. Kearny died at Chantilly because a subordinate pointed out that there was a gap in the line, and Kearny denied it. To prove it, Kearny rode into the gap alone, and (surprise) rode into the enemy. I wish I could read a good biography of Kearny, but none seems available. We have, instead, this historical curiosity, and a window into a writing style that no-one tolerates anymore. CBsIP: (dusty stacks of student manuscripts) The Year's Best Science Fiction, Twenty-Seventh Annual Collection, Gardner Dozois The Journal of a Disappointed Man, W. N. P. Barbellion Ninety Degrees North, Fergus Fleming The Things They Carried, Tim O'Brien |